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Please post a poem, post a link, or read a poem. Feedback is appreciated, so if you read something let the poet know how it touched you.
Posted by Cosmic 
Nov 1, 2005
1:57 PM
You can check out some of my poetry at Allpoetry.com.
Here's the link to my page.
http://allpoetry.com/cosmic transient
Posted by Cosmic 
Nov 1, 2005
1:58 PM
Idle In Your Absence

Without you my brain is idle,
No questions to jog the memory,
No funny things to twitch the smile,
No double-meaning phrases to make me blush.

You are the eyes in my soul,
That silly burning that is nothing and everything.
It is not love; it is more than intrigue.
It is gone, and gone is my livelihood.

Without you my days are long.
My long days in your presence are short.
My short days are spent in long tasks.
My long tasks are only a distraction from you.

You’ve ended my blind happiness,
Opened my eyes to something more
Funny, interesting, interested, & breathing.
You are, you were, you’re gone.
Nov 3, 2005
6:25 AM
That is a cool poem.
I love it! Great flow! Great glue! Great ending!
You share good! :)


=== Original Message ===>>>>


Idle In Your Absence

Without you my brain is idle,
No questions to jog the memory,
No funny things to twitch the smile,
No double-meaning phrases to make me blush.

You are the eyes in my soul,
That silly burning that is nothing and everything.
It is not love; it is more than intrigue.
It is gone, and gone is my livelihood.

Without you my days are long.
My long days in your presence are short.
My short days are spent in long tasks.
My long tasks are only a distraction from you.

You’ve ended my blind happiness,
Opened my eyes to something more
Funny, interesting, interested, & breathing.
You are, you were, you’re gone.
Posted by Cosmic 
Nov 3, 2005
2:00 PM
She seemed like such a nice girl,
professional from hair to toes.
But she removed all shreds of niceness,
when the bedroom doors did quickly close.

A tattooed heart peeked out of her blouse.
Her skirt faintly concealed a ring.
Could this nice girl be oh so bad?
Her eyes said she was up for anything.

To describe the rest just wouldn't be nice.
I am a gentleman you see.
But I can tell you one thing for sure.
She brought out the bad boy in me.
Posted by Cosmic 
Nov 4, 2005
9:13 AM
Awesome! Craving is a great word, an intense emotion, and won't be quenched until satisfied. :)
Cool!

=== Original Message ===>>>>

A huge craving just came to me
Your lips close to mine I want to feel
To feel how close your hands are to me
And to know my knees will go weak
Temped by your side I will feel
And yes…a kiss, a kiss my lips want to feel
Grab my face and bring it close to you
Look into my eyes
Touch my lips softly
And take this craving away from me
Your soft lips close to mine
I close my eyes
And depart to another world
Chills all over my body
Your hands embracing me
Your soft touch over me
Come and fulfill this craving with me!
Posted by Cosmic 
Nov 4, 2005
10:02 AM
To touch, to feel, to hold

so that hearts can feel each other's presence

To get in tune with one another

To caress and stimulate one another

To anticipate the other,

tease and be amazed by the other

to comfort and care for one another

to cherish and live each new day

as a celebration

of our beats,

complimenting the other

in unison, in love
Posted by Cosmic 
Nov 4, 2005
10:05 AM
I like your style!!!

=== Original Message ===>>>>


Idle In Your Absence

Without you my brain is idle,
No questions to jog the memory,
No funny things to twitch the smile,
No double-meaning phrases to make me blush.

You are the eyes in my soul,
That silly burning that is nothing and everything.
It is not love; it is more than intrigue.
It is gone, and gone is my livelihood.

Without you my days are long.
My long days in your presence are short.
My short days are spent in long tasks.
My long tasks are only a distraction from you.

You’ve ended my blind happiness,
Opened my eyes to something more
Funny, interesting, interested, & breathing.
You are, you were, you’re gone.
Posted by Diana 
Nov 4, 2005
9:49 AM
LOL, that was great. A gentleman indeed to keep quiet then yet let the world through your words, reading in between the lines and only imagining.
=== Original Message ===>>>>

She seemed like such a nice girl,
professional from hair to toes.
But she removed all shreds of niceness,
when the bedroom doors did quickly close.

A tattooed heart peeked out of her blouse.
Her skirt faintly concealed a ring.
Could this nice girl be oh so bad?
Her eyes said she was up for anything.

To describe the rest just wouldn't be nice.
I am a gentleman you see.
But I can tell you one thing for sure.
She brought out the bad boy in me.
Posted by Diana 
Nov 4, 2005
9:51 AM
A huge craving just came to me
Your lips close to mine I want to feel
To feel how close your hands are to me
And to know my knees will go weak
Temped by your side I will feel
And yes…a kiss, a kiss my lips want to feel
Grab my face and bring it close to you
Look into my eyes
Touch my lips softly
And take this craving away from me
Your soft lips close to mine
I close my eyes
And depart to another world
Chills all over my body
Your hands embracing me
Your soft touch over me
Come and fulfill this craving with me!
Posted by Diana 
Nov 4, 2005
9:55 AM
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