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Please post a poem, post a link, or read a poem. Feedback is appreciated, so if you read something let the poet know how it touched you.
Posted by Cosmic
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Nov 1, 2005 1:57 PM |
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You can check out some of my poetry at Allpoetry.com.
Here's the link to my page. http://allpoetry.com/cosmic transient Posted by Cosmic
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Nov 1, 2005 1:58 PM |
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Idle In Your Absence
Without you my brain is idle, No questions to jog the memory, No funny things to twitch the smile, No double-meaning phrases to make me blush. You are the eyes in my soul, That silly burning that is nothing and everything. It is not love; it is more than intrigue. It is gone, and gone is my livelihood. Without you my days are long. My long days in your presence are short. My short days are spent in long tasks. My long tasks are only a distraction from you. Youve ended my blind happiness, Opened my eyes to something more Funny, interesting, interested, & breathing. You are, you were, youre gone. Posted by Tiffany
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Nov 3, 2005 6:25 AM |
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That is a cool poem.
I love it! Great flow! Great glue! Great ending! You share good! :) === Original Message ===>>>> Idle In Your Absence Without you my brain is idle, No questions to jog the memory, No funny things to twitch the smile, No double-meaning phrases to make me blush. You are the eyes in my soul, That silly burning that is nothing and everything. It is not love; it is more than intrigue. It is gone, and gone is my livelihood. Without you my days are long. My long days in your presence are short. My short days are spent in long tasks. My long tasks are only a distraction from you. Youve ended my blind happiness, Opened my eyes to something more Funny, interesting, interested, & breathing. You are, you were, youre gone. Posted by Cosmic
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Nov 3, 2005 2:00 PM |
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She seemed like such a nice girl,
professional from hair to toes. But she removed all shreds of niceness, when the bedroom doors did quickly close. A tattooed heart peeked out of her blouse. Her skirt faintly concealed a ring. Could this nice girl be oh so bad? Her eyes said she was up for anything. To describe the rest just wouldn't be nice. I am a gentleman you see. But I can tell you one thing for sure. She brought out the bad boy in me. Posted by Cosmic
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Nov 4, 2005 9:13 AM |
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Awesome! Craving is a great word, an intense emotion, and won't be quenched until satisfied. :)
Cool! === Original Message ===>>>> A huge craving just came to me Your lips close to mine I want to feel To feel how close your hands are to me And to know my knees will go weak Temped by your side I will feel And yes a kiss, a kiss my lips want to feel Grab my face and bring it close to you Look into my eyes Touch my lips softly And take this craving away from me Your soft lips close to mine I close my eyes And depart to another world Chills all over my body Your hands embracing me Your soft touch over me Come and fulfill this craving with me! Posted by Cosmic
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Nov 4, 2005 10:02 AM |
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To touch, to feel, to hold
so that hearts can feel each other's presence To get in tune with one another To caress and stimulate one another To anticipate the other, tease and be amazed by the other to comfort and care for one another to cherish and live each new day as a celebration of our beats, complimenting the other in unison, in love Posted by Cosmic
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Nov 4, 2005 10:05 AM |
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I like your style!!!
=== Original Message ===>>>> Idle In Your Absence Without you my brain is idle, No questions to jog the memory, No funny things to twitch the smile, No double-meaning phrases to make me blush. You are the eyes in my soul, That silly burning that is nothing and everything. It is not love; it is more than intrigue. It is gone, and gone is my livelihood. Without you my days are long. My long days in your presence are short. My short days are spent in long tasks. My long tasks are only a distraction from you. Youve ended my blind happiness, Opened my eyes to something more Funny, interesting, interested, & breathing. You are, you were, youre gone. Posted by Diana
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Nov 4, 2005 9:49 AM |
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LOL, that was great. A gentleman indeed to keep quiet then yet let the world through your words, reading in between the lines and only imagining.
=== Original Message ===>>>> She seemed like such a nice girl, professional from hair to toes. But she removed all shreds of niceness, when the bedroom doors did quickly close. A tattooed heart peeked out of her blouse. Her skirt faintly concealed a ring. Could this nice girl be oh so bad? Her eyes said she was up for anything. To describe the rest just wouldn't be nice. I am a gentleman you see. But I can tell you one thing for sure. She brought out the bad boy in me. Posted by Diana
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Nov 4, 2005 9:51 AM |
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A huge craving just came to me
Your lips close to mine I want to feel To feel how close your hands are to me And to know my knees will go weak Temped by your side I will feel And yes a kiss, a kiss my lips want to feel Grab my face and bring it close to you Look into my eyes Touch my lips softly And take this craving away from me Your soft lips close to mine I close my eyes And depart to another world Chills all over my body Your hands embracing me Your soft touch over me Come and fulfill this craving with me! Posted by Diana
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Nov 4, 2005 9:55 AM |
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