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To My Mom
"Hey Mom"
Hey Mom
how have you been
I've been doing great
I can't complain
I have been doing
everything you taught me
but I'm not that boy anymore
so you don't have to baby me
I want to thank you
for the things you did for me
even though Dad was there
you were still the one I needed
you taught me to be tough
to stand on what i believe
not to give in to the world
but this has really influenced me
you taught me to be true
and to be honest with myself
to follow my heart at all times and
that mistakes are just lessons learned
you taught me love
the very meaning of it
I tried to find ways to not get hurt
but there was no escaping it
but Mom there was still
so much you didn't say
so much I had
to learn on my own everyday
Mom you were by my side
the whole time I cried
you reminded me that
everything will be okay
Mom I have no idea
why I'm writing this
and I didn't know why
you loved me the way you did
but I look at my son now
and I understand
I hate it when he cries
it hurts me inside
I don't see how he could do it Mom
why couldn't he hold me like that
what was wrong with me Mom
why couldn't he love back
I did everything he needed
went everywhere he went
I told him loved him
and he didn't remark on it
but mom you never
taught me to hate
you didn't teach me to despise him
so I'll Love him anyway
Carlos Contreras JR.
JCC Kreations 2006
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Carlos
"Hey Mom"
Hey Mom
how have you been
I've been doing great
I can't complain
I have been doing
everything you taught me
but I'm not that boy anymore
so you don't have to baby me
I want to thank you
for the things you did for me
even though Dad was there
you were still the one I needed
you taught me to be tough
to stand on what i believe
not to give in to the world
but this has really influenced me
you taught me to be true
and to be honest with myself
to follow my heart at all times and
that mistakes are just lessons learned
you taught me love
the very meaning of it
I tried to find ways to not get hurt
but there was no escaping it
but Mom there was still
so much you didn't say
so much I had
to learn on my own everyday
Mom you were by my side
the whole time I cried
you reminded me that
everything will be okay
Mom I have no idea
why I'm writing this
and I didn't know why
you loved me the way you did
but I look at my son now
and I understand
I hate it when he cries
it hurts me inside
I don't see how he could do it Mom
why couldn't he hold me like that
what was wrong with me Mom
why couldn't he love back
I did everything he needed
went everywhere he went
I told him loved him
and he didn't remark on it
but mom you never
taught me to hate
you didn't teach me to despise him
so I'll Love him anyway
Carlos Contreras JR.
JCC Kreations 2006
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Jul 16, 2008
9:31 AM
What a lovely tribute to your mom -- I hope you have given her a copy of this!
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What a lovely tribute to your mom -- I hope you have given her a copy of this!
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