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Topic: Use Me...
The fact that they never called,
But yet, hold you when you're cold.

The fact that they only want one thing,
But care enough to wait.

There's all the other ones in the world,
But pick you cause you're the only girl.

When they're with their friends, they dont want you in sight,
But kind enough to kiss and hold you tight.

Only hold hands with you when no ones around,
But always makes you smile when you're feeling down.

Say they love you and that's not fake,
But still the one who made you break.

The one who finally gets in your pants,
But still gives you a disappointing glance.

Now they dont answer your calls nor talk to you,
You waited cause that's what you thought they'd do.

In the end they are all the same,
You just have to play the game.

The fact they're still not there when you're about to cry,
And in the end you know it was a lie...
Jun 21, 2008
9:58 AM
this poem is.. sad..
i hate when guys do that, it gives the rest of us a bad name.. (not all guys are like that.. just about 90%.. im almost ashamed to be a guy sometimes..) ya, but i like it alot when ppl can put.. actual emotions in ther writing, i cant write ne thing about the real world.. and i admire the ones who can.
Jun 21, 2008
10:54 AM
umm... thanks?
i don't know what to say lol
Jun 21, 2008
12:19 PM
Kristen, i love ur poem! it's filled with sorrow, frustration and so many other emotions. I've personally never experienced something like this before, but i'm sure u will inspire many that have. And, i agree with Nik, not all guys are bad, you just have to be patient and wait for the right one to come along, even long it's a long process, lol...but it will be worth it in the end, don't rush, cause u will end up feeling just as the definition of ur poem. best wishes:)
Jun 26, 2008
10:30 AM
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