During sleepless nights
I pretend that the past isn't real
It brings back how I used to feel
So much sadness in my hopeless life
Never knew things would change so fast

You're not here and I'm alone
Trying to runaway from this pain that has grown
I feel so empty now that you're gone
There's so much crying; I feel like dying

This one is for you
And these words aren't brand new
Though it's coming from the heart

Thank you for the life you've given me
Thank you for the hope; I'm finally free
You'll always be in my mind
Cross my heart, hope to die
I never will forget you

During sleepless nights and endless dreams
I hope one day you'll visit me
Just like it was planned to be
So that day you'll finally see

I can't go on without you
I hope this wish will come true
These words inside my heart
Stay in there till we're apart
Feel these tears coming in my eyes
I try not to cry
I'll try
This shooting pain in my eyes
Can't hold it anymore

You're gone; you walked away
These feelings went away
Now I'm colder than the ocean breeze
Now you're too far gone
Please stay with me.

During sleepless nights
I pretend that the past isn't real
It brings back how I used to feel
So much sadness in my hopeless life
Never knew things would change so fast

You're not here and I'm alone
Trying to runaway from this pain that has grown
I feel so empty now that you're gone
There's so much crying; I feel like dying

This one is for you
And these words aren't brand new
Though it's coming from the heart

Thank you for the life you've given me
Thank you for the hope; I'm finally free
You'll always be in my mind
Cross my heart, hope to die
I never will forget you

During sleepless nights and endless dreams
I hope one day you'll visit me
Just like it was planned to be
So that day you'll finally see

I can't go on without you
I hope this wish will come true
These words inside my heart
Stay in there till we're apart
Feel these tears coming in my eyes
I try not to cry
I'll try
This shooting pain in my eyes
Can't hold it anymore

You're gone; you walked away
These feelings went away
Now I'm colder than the ocean breeze
Now you're too far gone
Please stay with me.

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Wow, I really captured emotion in this. You definatley put thought into it. You took your time, and stayed on topic. I read it really slow, (but thats a good ting) so that I could try to feel what you're feeling. I have been through this. It isn't easy. Good luck with that and good job! Keep writing 0_o

Wow, I really captured emotion in this. You definatley put thought into it. You took your time, and stayed on topic. I read it really slow, (but thats a good ting) so that I could try to feel what you're feeling. I have been through this. It isn't easy. Good luck with that and good job! Keep writing 0_o

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Wow, I really captured emotion in this. You definatley put thought into it. You took your time, and stayed on topic. I read it really slow, (but thats a good ting) so that I could try to feel what you're feeling. I have been through this. It isn't easy. Good luck with that and good job! Keep writing 0_o

Wow, I really captured emotion in this. You definatley put thought into it. You took your time, and stayed on topic. I read it really slow, (but thats a good ting) so that I could try to feel what you're feeling. I have been through this. It isn't easy. Good luck with that and good job! Keep writing 0_o

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Wow, I really captured emotion in this. You definatley put thought into it. You took your time, and stayed on topic. I read it really slow, (but thats a good ting) so that I could try to feel what you're feeling. I have been through this. It isn't easy. Good luck with that and good job! Keep writing 0_o

Wow, I really captured emotion in this. You definatley put thought into it. You took your time, and stayed on topic. I read it really slow, (but thats a good ting) so that I could try to feel what you're feeling. I have been through this. It isn't easy. Good luck with that and good job! Keep writing 0_o

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THNX MA I PUT ALOT OF THOUGHT INTO IT N ALOT OF EMOTION

THNX MA I PUT ALOT OF THOUGHT INTO IT N ALOT OF EMOTION

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Well, you're a good writer (and sorry for the double posts) and I think that if you continued to write, you could make a difference in the world. Thats what I plan to do. Check out my poem that I posted... much apprieciated. =)

Well, you're a good writer (and sorry for the double posts) and I think that if you continued to write, you could make a difference in the world. Thats what I plan to do. Check out my poem that I posted... much apprieciated. =)

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AITE MA IMA DO THAT =]

AITE MA IMA DO THAT =]

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wow, Jerry, ur poem is very nice, romantic in a way, i hope it will capture the heart of ur special gurl. it flows very well together, with emotion and i can tell u mean every word u wrote, keep on writing:)

wow, Jerry, ur poem is very nice, romantic in a way, i hope it will capture the heart of ur special gurl. it flows very well together, with emotion and i can tell u mean every word u wrote, keep on writing:)

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THNX =] I REALLY DO MEAN ERRY THANG I WROTE IN THIS N IMA POST A NEW POEM VERY SOON

THNX =] I REALLY DO MEAN ERRY THANG I WROTE IN THIS N IMA POST A NEW POEM VERY SOON

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ok, that's pretty cool

ok, that's pretty cool

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