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Topic: when i die...
Let no one grieve me
Since I have lived all i can
Why am I wished the extra pains
That only late adulthood brings
Maybe all my goodness i have done
Why do you wish i am not returned
To whence i come and i am made
Closer to my creator shall i be
Farther removed from all injustices
Shall i be, when i am dead
So why do you mourn me
A boy that has suffered so much pain
A heart that has been broken many times
That even a pin prick can tear apart
Maybe 'tis best that i am gone from here
Buried and a ash that do the soil some good
I have prayed only one prayer all my life
For me to live till the moment i die
I have never asked for my absence
From my place of eternal adventure
Though no one looks towards it with vigor
But enough of all the known rigor
Maybe i will become an elf in the afterlife
Or maybe i will be a tree in creation
But one thing i am sure of
Is that no pain can i cause no more
Is better i be gone from here
Though i live on in your heart
May 8, 2008
1:15 PM
This is a pretty cool piece of work. I hear people say, "When I die, don't cry please", but they can never come up with a reason why. You elaborated on this... so Thanks! =) Keep writing and god job! 0_o
Posted by Emi 
Jun 16, 2008
10:13 AM
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