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Topic: A MAN...
A MAN ...

I want to find love,

I want a man who loves me just for me

That he will give everything to me,

That him never lie, no for make me feel good

That never betrays the trust that depositare in him

that give me his heart,

Without requiring no more than reason.


I want to I feel loved and protected

I want to be the owner of his life,

I want to be loved for eternity

As I will love him.


I do not want a prince blue

I do not want to live in dreams and fantasies

I just want a man of truth

And this just in my reality.


I want a man mature and focused on their ideas

I want a man who is willing to die,
A dying for me


The only thing I want is A MAN,

More is not a fleeting dream, which will not be realized.
Posted by Karen  
May 2, 2008
3:59 PM
Karen
Nicely done
Heartfully expressed desire
for true love
your passion is clearly focused
and the reader can fully feel
the emotional plee
Well written and expressed
Thanks for sharing
Posted by Mike 
May 7, 2008
7:04 AM
Thanks…

It's my thinking...is my feeling ...
is what I want, is what I'm looking ...
The weather will give me the reason ...
the reason of living, the reason of there ...
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Posted by Karen  
May 8, 2008
5:41 PM
wow, Karen ur poem is very powerful and beautiful, i think many ppl can relate to it, expresses sincere thoughts, very nice...
Jun 7, 2008
1:14 PM
Thank you Alicia...
Posted by Karen  
Jun 10, 2008
12:07 PM
You have very nice ideas, and I respect you wanting to share them. Many women/girls can relate to this in some aspect. However, the poem itself was a little dull. I think it owuld have been a lot nicer with a rhyme scheme to keep the reader active while reading. Despite this, great idea and remember that you can always make a rewrite! Keep writing 0_o
Posted by Emi 
Jun 16, 2008
10:10 AM
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