Pale blue mist surrounds you
Silver steed in your embrace
Soft waters gently sing
Tree's shield you from the rain
~
Sweet breeze toys so gently
Grasses dance in such delight
Dim glow from the heavens
Lights from firefly's
~
Two swans who are lovers
So pure that they wear white
The moon that is mirrored
Off the tealed stream bed tonight
~
Soft blanket of green moss
Comforts where you rest
Under the great pines fragrance
Where you lay your head
~
Crickets play their orchestra
Bemusing their songs are
Soft coo's from a dove
Off in a distance under the stars
~
Little spotted fawn
Taste the dew upon a leaf
Everything is magic
In the Forest of Dreams
~
Lisa '08

Pale blue mist surrounds you
Silver steed in your embrace
Soft waters gently sing
Tree's shield you from the rain
~
Sweet breeze toys so gently
Grasses dance in such delight
Dim glow from the heavens
Lights from firefly's
~
Two swans who are lovers
So pure that they wear white
The moon that is mirrored
Off the tealed stream bed tonight
~
Soft blanket of green moss
Comforts where you rest
Under the great pines fragrance
Where you lay your head
~
Crickets play their orchestra
Bemusing their songs are
Soft coo's from a dove
Off in a distance under the stars
~
Little spotted fawn
Taste the dew upon a leaf
Everything is magic
In the Forest of Dreams
~
Lisa '08

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Love the Title of this piece.Very discriptive but not so much as to not allow the reader to make his or her own interpretation. "Crickets play their orchestra
Bemusing their songs are
Soft coo's from a dove
Off in a distance under the stars" loved this part of your poem the most.Great write!

Love the Title of this piece.Very discriptive but not so much as to not allow the reader to make his or her own interpretation. "Crickets play their orchestra
Bemusing their songs are
Soft coo's from a dove
Off in a distance under the stars" loved this part of your poem the most.Great write!

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Thank you very much Gary.....your comment is much appreciated!

Thank you very much Gary.....your comment is much appreciated!

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Hi Lisa: As I joined the poetry group, I saw your piece, which is quite a captivating one.
Your poem is very well described, the flow is musical and rhythmic, the poem is a very well painted picture of a dream.
Your imagination is applausible and finally, I'd like to say that it was quite romantic.

Hi Lisa: As I joined the poetry group, I saw your piece, which is quite a captivating one.
Your poem is very well described, the flow is musical and rhythmic, the poem is a very well painted picture of a dream.
Your imagination is applausible and finally, I'd like to say that it was quite romantic.

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This is peacefully beautiful
the gentle imagery-subtle wording-classy rhyme form
the entire imagery prpjects a sense of enchantment
in thie midst of a romantic prelude. very nicely done
"Two swans who are lovers
So pure that they wear white

This is peacefully beautiful
the gentle imagery-subtle wording-classy rhyme form
the entire imagery prpjects a sense of enchantment
in thie midst of a romantic prelude. very nicely done
"Two swans who are lovers
So pure that they wear white

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Thank you so very much Faramarz.......i'm very glad you enjoyed this poem.

Thank you so very much Faramarz.......i'm very glad you enjoyed this poem.

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Thank you for your comment Mike...it is truly appreciated.

Thank you for your comment Mike...it is truly appreciated.

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That is a one piece of art, I`ll send it to s`one if U dont mind.What a talent! By the way Im Sam Smith.

That is a one piece of art, I`ll send it to s`one if U dont mind.What a talent! By the way Im Sam Smith.

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wow.. this is what peom, poet and poetry should be like.you have portrayed the dream the way poet dreams. please keep on posting something like this.

wow.. this is what peom, poet and poetry should be like.you have portrayed the dream the way poet dreams. please keep on posting something like this.

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Lisa,your prayers and your hearts dreams are heard within this peace and the forest my friend

Lisa,your prayers and your hearts dreams are heard within this peace and the forest my friend

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