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Topic: The World to a blind man
Walking stick in hand and senses heightened
My world is in darkenss yet my sight is brightened
The stick taps to the pitter patter of my heart
The street stretches before me: a long ending path
Beyond the last lone lamppost I pass
My time I take; no need to hurry or walk fast

I can feel the sun warming my skin
As glorious as marigolds is the light I bask in
How I long to see the colours of the world
The trees, the flowers, the ppl with hearts of gold
Without my sense of touch and taste
Life on earth would be a waste

To touch petals of velvet and silk
To taste fields of honey and milk
This is my meat and my drink
This is my heaven on earth, don't u think?
Away with my dream when I could see; when fishes flew
and forests walked and figs grew upon thorns
Time to take the bull by the horns
I may be as blind as a bat
But I can survive in my world of darkness, and thats that!
Apr 12, 2008
8:32 PM
Very well written and percieved
makes the heart feel the what is being projected
expressed with passion: an ode to the blind man in ways
I like how you initiated the heightened senses factor
many lines draw the reader to delving ponder
thanks for sharing
"To touch petals of velvet and silk
To taste fields of honey and milk
Posted by Mike 
May 7, 2008
7:12 AM

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